诗酒年华：小诗的小诗

普田

出个诗集吧，帮你找个出版社。在多写一些。

湖畔居士

谢谢诗酒挂上来分享. 童真的流露, 儿童的语言, ...非常高兴读到.

争取放在下一期的[石头山诗社诗集]里面.

浮子

复议居士教授，严重同意。，谢谢，分享。浮子

Best wishes to the little girl and the family! You will be all right!

若敏

谢谢小诗，为我们带来这些美丽而纯洁的诗篇。写得太好了，非常有才气。
告诉她，我们都为她骄傲，她是最棒的小诗人！
有什么比童心更美丽，更动人，更令人感动呢？
谢谢诗酒！为小诗祈祷！
请多多保重！

一飞

小小年纪能写出如此悦耳的诗句，能有如此超龄的思想，太不简单了。大赞！！！！衷心地祝福小诗，也祝福你们全家人。我发现了几处小错，想必是你打字时的不小心。
1.    Working with your friend
3rd stanza “When we were friends we have fun” should be “we had fun”
2.    You and I see
2nd stanza: “Now it’s in the flue sky” Is it meant to be “blue sky”?
3.    Dreams
4th stanza: “A necklaces to make”  “necklaces” should have no “s”
5th stanza: “Can’t go to your pace” Normally it is “at your pace”
9th stanza: “SNAP! It is lightening” “lightening” should have no “e” before “n”
4.    Summer Nights
3rd stanza: “I will be listen in a boat” should be “I will be listening…”
冒昧了。还望诗酒莫怪。

霜雕红叶

哇， 小诗的诗太迷人了。 小小的年纪文字竟颇为老道。 红叶阿姨准备再学几道名菜权做学费登门请教美食家小老师了。 这寥寥数笔，怎么就写的这么纯，这么真呢。

Days are bright,
and nights are long.
But everything still ----
composing a song,

Use all their might
to pursue a note.
Birds and people,
Cricket and moles.

杨子

小诗纯真，可爱的诗，读罢让人感动深深！