美花 by;思婷

思婷

美花在开，                 pretty flowers are bloming,
美丽的红。                 a pretty red.
清水在滴滴，               clear water is dripping,
天上的蓝！                  the color of sky blue!
地上的草，                  the ground's grass,
漂亮的绿。                 a perfect beautiful green.
春天来了，                spring has come,
这么好！                  thats really greatt!!!!!!!!!



this is my first chinese poem plz enjoy, keep on eating chicken!!!!!

好！

湖畔居士

Excellent! Little Si-Tin!  English poem is almost perfect, and Chinese poem, your Dad should be able to help you.  I know that maybe he is too busy, so I suggest that you can make minor changes, like below.  Thanks for sharing!
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鲜花在盛开，                 pretty flowers are bloming,
多么的红。                 a pretty red.
溪水在流淌，               clear water is dripping,
天一样蓝！                  the color of sky blue!
青青小草啊，                  the ground's grass,
那么的绿。                 a perfect beautiful green.
春天来了，                spring has come,
多么好！                  thats really greatt!!!!!!!!!
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Yes, I will continue to eat more chicken!

玉山峰

Si-Tin,Good job, I like it, What kind of flowers? I like the fish peom which has fish background introduction.

You're a very smart girl,  i really love your poem.

女孩儿的诗可爱，幼稚。你修饰过的诗老练，中文底子厚。没有了稚气 ：）都喜欢！