Autumn and Moon -by 思婷（4th grade)

湖畔居士

引用第5楼思婷于2010-09-17 17:14发表的 :
[quote]引用第4楼老郭于2010-09-17 16:47发表的  :
Considering the age, it is an excellent poem!
thank you you are very kind but umm your picture is younger than me。is it for real?

Good question!  Only Lao Guo can answer your question!

湖畔居士

引用第2楼思婷于2010-09-17 15:57发表的 Welcome you :
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Hello it is very kind of you for writing a good review for me.Thank you, also my dad told me that you were the organizer of the website,is that for real?I hope that I will win the contest. If I dont my dad went all through this rough computer for nothing.stupid harddrive.it is sooo slow.the connection is slow too.i hope my dad will buy a better harddrive nxt time.
im a girl.im chinese born in america


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Your dad is right - I am the "sponsor" for this poem competition.  Yes, you will win the award for your age group and for English poem. If I had a chance to talk to your dad, I would ask him to buy a new computer for you!

Have a good weekend, Si-Tin!

mm

妙！！！

愣姐

引用第12楼mm于2010-09-18 07:34发表的 回 7楼(美翼传奇) 的帖子 :
妙！！！

小朋友写的不错，鼓励一下！

思婷

引用第11楼湖畔居士于2010-09-17 23:20发表的 Re:Welcome you :

Your dad is right - I am the "sponsor" for this poem competition.  Yes, you will win the award for your age group and for English poem. If I had a chance to talk to your dad, I would ask him to buy a new computer for you!

Have a good weekend, Si-Tin!

Thank you sponsor,I did enjoy the party at likeside with my chinese classmates! It was lots of fun. I may wtite something about it ...

这个译文顺流，不知忠于原文否？可惜我英文很一般。如果专家认同，居士能不能贴在思婷的栏下，给诗会加一道小菜？

《咏秋》
初感微风凉，迈步出门，自然真爽！
看戏兔湿露草上，蝴蝶花丛藏，甜嫩玉露。
太阳，为我也披霓裳，一朵花间里，我爱秋光！

《秋月》
坐床前，窗外望，一轮秋月
升起翰墨天上。
鸟声蚁，耳中语，“晚安”轻唱！
树枝摇，细语飘：
秋月几度，挂翰墨一轮最亮？

思婷

谢谢 你。weekend 很好！！best wishes and may good luck be with you!!!hope you eat lots of yummy food!!!!!!




sincerly,
思婷

湖畔居士

引用第15楼游客于2010-09-19 12:59发表的 回 楼主(思婷) 的帖子 :
这个译文顺流，不知忠于原文否？可惜我英文很一般。如果专家认同，居士能不能贴在思婷的栏下，给诗会加一道小菜？

《咏秋》
初感微风凉，迈步出门，自然真爽！
看戏兔湿露草上，蝴蝶花丛藏，甜嫩玉露。
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谢谢15楼客人. 好的, 我把译文挂上去.

引用第17楼湖畔居士于2010-09-19 23:51发表的 Re:回 楼主(思婷) 的帖子 :

谢谢15楼客人. 好的, 我把译文挂上去.

居士热心，童叟无欺，一六八热闹！

引用第18楼游客于2010-09-20 13:39发表的 Re:Re:回 楼主(思婷) 的帖子 :

居士热心，童叟无欺，一六八热闹！

勇气可嘉，重在参与。