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The Great Picnic
When I thought about going there at first,
I thought it was going to be boring,like last,last years picnic.
But when I was there it was a blast.
There were hula hoops,
a lake nearby to play[THOUGH IT HAD VERY SPLIPPERING ROCKS AND FREEZING WATER].
Great food,all the teachers there.
Prizes and volleyball,
friends to play with,
and sand to build.
As I fell on a slippey rock,
it wasnt very funny but I got wet.
Daddy laughs,Annie[best friend]gasps,
Sarah[friend]tweaks her head.
There was worms to care for,
rocks to find and clean.
I think you will love it,
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发表于 2010-9-20 14:39:37
发表于 2010-9-20 17:40:33
